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 by V. Barrett
 
 


           
                      That night she danced around the fires, remembering the 
way he 
                      
                       looked ,the softness of his lips, the way his hands 
felt running

                       along her body.

                        dancing faster, envisioning his eyes as she begged 
the gods 
   
                         to bring him back to her. In her mind she knew it 
was wrong,

                         but in her heart she ached for him so. She knew that 
she 

                         needed his love to survive. No matter the 
consenquences

                         he was her only desire.  Faster, faster dancing 
still, 

                          building and raising the energy, higher and higher,

                         untill all at once she dropped to her knees, 
releasing the 

                         energy. she raised her face to the light of the full 
moon.

                          Tears streaming down her face, into the darkness she

                           screamed out his name.