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24 June 2005: Yesterday, I found out to my shock that a workshop I was scheduled to run at my local writers' center is a go. Five people, the minimum required, signed up for it, and it costs money! Twice before it's been scheduled but been cancelled due to lack of interest. Meanwhile, a few days ago I revised--perhaps made a final draft of--a collage-based mathemaku I made as an example of collage-based mathemaku for a previous workshop:


Biggest change: the present remainder in place of "a fair breeze." Rationale: the shiplike sub-dividend product (i.e., the collage) seemed already whipping along under favorable winds. The cliche, "uncharted waters" was my first thought as a replacement, but what I ended with is much better.

I also pushed the brown circloid (my word, if I remember correctly, for filled-in circle) to the left because the design looked wrong, and added the big green circloid. The result makes sense to me, but would be hard to put into words.

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