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3 May 2005: Today, I'm going into my laziness mode, as I so frequently do, and just repeat what I said in three posts uesterday to New-Poetry about a dumb list of "The 15 Best American Poems of the 20th-Century."

I began with a brief post in which I said that I didn't have much time, so would just say that I wondered if the Brinkley who made the list was David. He would have made the same list, I'm fairly sure--he would have consulted some Harvard professor to find out about Olson (who has a poem on the list). I should think even the worst stasguard at New-Poetry would find it stupid that all the best poems of the century but two (actually three, maybe as many as five) were written before 1950, and the two not, not written long after that.

In my second post, I said I thought such a list should spark a hugely interesting discussion among true students of poetry. Why? Because, among much else, it would get them defining value in poetry, defending their kinds of poetry, perhaps exposing unfairly obscure poets to view, giving others direct or indirect insights into the way they conceive of poetry, arguing the possibility of determing which poems should be on such a list, presenting ideas for better lists, probing the methods of list-makers, critics, reputation-makers, and so on.

I ended with a request for a new word or phrase I thought would be useful. Maybe "immediately pre-contemporary" would be it. "Penultiporary?" What I want is a word that could be used in lists like the Brinkley one to make it honest without a lot of extra words--i.e., allow Brinkley to present a "top 15 penultiporary poems of the 20th-century." "Penultiporary" meaning up to within the last thirty years or so. How about "penulticontempry?" Still bad, but at least improved?

At that point, as I said, I felt tired and stupid, but nevertheless like I was making a terrific contribution to World Culture with my post. I followed it with a dialogue with Richard Dillon:

> Bob, can you place each of these best poems into one or more of your categories?

Lemme think about it. Many problems. One is that I have more than one set of categories. Several sets, some of which interlap and/or are confusingly unsettled. Right now I'm involved with lineages--as a student/searcher and lit-history hobbyist. Cummings the focus.

>For instance, I'd put Jeffers and Ginsberg into at least one of the >received lineages from Whitman.

Ginsberg is the contragenteel version of Whitman, for sure. I'm a big fan of Jeffers but haven't read him analytically, nor read him for a while. Frequent long lines like Whitman. Free verse. Visionary. Certainly on one of the lines out of Whitman.

>Also, how do you account the relationship of Eliot and the way his mind worked to make "The Waste Land" to theories of Cubism in your taxonomy?

"Cubism" is problematic for me. Not sure what it is. I think of it as (1) a means of distortion the way impressionism was and (2) showing a subject from more than one point of view at once. I think of Eliot/Pound as pioneering the jump-cut, not as cubists (and a serious lit-history question for me would be who was the first to make a jump-cut poem in English, and who the first to make an effective such poem). I don't think you can "see" a subject from two points of view at once in a poem; in the "Wasteland" you see them from two points of view consecutively with no bridge, so it's disorienting--if you really see any specific subject from two points of view in the poem. Seems to me you get jerked from one scene to another, never seeing any one scene from more than one point of view, but seeing them in a perceptually illogical order. . . .

> Wouldn't Cummings and Eliot share a category?

I hadn't thought so, but maybe they should.

> Can you provide a chart that would check off each poem per category?

I hope to eventually sketch some kind of charting scheme but don't have one yet.

> Possibly, a double helix model of poem lineages could be envisaged to model literary poetries simultaneous evolutions in generations, societies, ages.

It'd be complex, for sure--certainly not ABCDEF. One interest of mine is in how much effect various poets/poems had on the . . . poetisphere? aside from influences on individuals.

> Illumination from Yeat's astrology system could be included in this vision.

Dunno 'bout that, Richard.

> As to WCW: most poetry people would vote for "Spring and All" over "Patterson," in my opinion. And, in what categories would you place these two poems?

I think some poem by several of the poets with poems on the list is reasonable, but would have others than the ones chosen--or would throw up my hands at the impossibility of picking out, for instance, Stevens's "best" poem. I'd rate "The Wheelbarrow" Williams's best poem, but am very biased toward minimalism. (So if were list-making, I'd make several, one for each size of poem, and others.)

>The same one(s)? "Maximus" a co-inhabitant of the category into which "Patterson" is identified?

"Spring and All" would not be in a category with "Paterson," I don't think, but the "Cantos," "Paterson" and Maximus" would have to go together, I would think.

Okay, off the top of my head, how I'd class the 15 poems according to my Official Taxonomy (which I never can remember in detail):

Number 1: T.S. Eliot, "The Wasteland"
Burstnorm/Idiological/jump-cut

Number 2: Hart Crane, "The Bridge"
same, probably, but I only know excerpts of this poem

Number 3: Allen Ginsburg, "Howl"
Plaintext/Contragenteel

Number 4: Langston Hughes, "The Negro Speaks of Rivers"
I don't know this one but would guess Songmode/maybe contragenteel

Number 5: Robert Frost, "Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening"
Songmode/traditional (actually, I haven't worked out a taxonomy of traditional formal verse--I'm sure I'd accept almost any critic's taxonomy that was based on techniques)

Number 6: Carl Sandburg, "The People, Yes"
Probably with Hughes's. I no doubt have read this poem but don't know it. Sandburg on this list is idiotic.

Number 7: Ezra Pound, "Pisan Cantos"
Plaintext/no subcategories

Number 8: Wallace Stevens, "The Snow Man"
Plaintext/Philosophical

Number 9: William Carlos Williams, "Patterson"
Plaintext or Burstnorm/jumpcut, I'm not sure.

Number 10: Elizabeth Bishop, "In the Waiting Room"
Another poem I've read without remembering. I can't even remember if she was a formalist, but think she was. (I tend not to remember whether modern poets are formal or freeverse.) So: songmode/traditional

Number 11: Robert Lowell, "For the Union Dead"
Mixed plaintext/songmode

Number 12: e e cummings (sic), "Somewhere I have never traveled, gladly beyond"
Plaintext/Semi-Infraverbal

Number 13: Gertrude Stein, "Lifting Belly"
probably Burstnorm/Xenolinguistic/non-representational but I can't remember anything of it

Number 14: Robinson Jeffers, "Shine, Perishing Republic"
Plaintext?

Number 15: Charles Olson, "The Maximus Poems"
between Plaintext and Burstnorm--make it bustnorm/idiological/jump-cut

I count Roethke better than all but Stevens with poems on this list (though not as important as Cummings, a tick better a poet). Plath and Sexton shouldn't have poems on it, but I'm surprised they don't. Stein is obviously on because she's a feminist icon.

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FOLLOW-UP

After I posted the entry above, Marcus Bales, New-Poetry's main verosopath, posted the following response, which I thought an interesting specimen of insanity, but am also posting so I can inter-pepper it with name-calling and bragging, being as insane in my own way as Bales:

> On 3 May 2005 at 7:01, Bob Grumman wrote:
> Okay, off the top of my head, how I'd class the 15 poems according to
> my Official Taxonomy (which I never can remember in detail):

"A taxonomy is a transparent system of necessary interconnections, not an idiosyncratic set of fuzzy categories of which the author himself cannot remember the details. This soi disant 'taxonomy' is an example of an execrable mis-use of scientific-sounding terminology to try to bolster a set of personal opinions to make them seem more significant or important than they are."

My critic has never made any slightly detailed attempt to refute the validity of the taxonomy I formally present (in near- if not fully-complete form) here. I sympathize with my critic's lack of fellow-feeling for my poor memory; one cannot expect someone with a two-room brain, if that, to understand how much more difficult it might be for a person with a 9-city brain perfectly to extract facts from a small room in his brain on the spur of the moment.

> Number 1: T.S. Eliot, "The Wasteland" Burstnorm/Idiological/jump- cut

> > Number 2: Hart Crane, "The Bridge"
< > same, probably, but I only know excerpts of this poem
> Number 4: Langston Hughes, "The Negro Speaks of Rivers"
> I don't know this one but would guess Songmode/maybe contragenteel
> Number 9: William Carlos Williams, "Patterson"
> Plaintext or Burstnorm/jumpcut, I'm not sure.

"Probably? I don't know? Maybe? I'm not sure? Is a blue jay a bird? Is a vole a mammal? Is a perch a fish? Come, come, Mr Grumman, you must do better than this if you want to make a serious claim to anything approaching a 'taxonomy' -- or else admit that this is merely a mis- used metaphor strung together to try to steal cultural authority from another field of endeavor."

I always find it somewhat upsetting how prone mediocrities are to mistaking an ichthyologist's willingness to jump from his dinghy into (announced) preliminary opinions about an Important Fish that's just appeared instead of rowing like mad for his yacht to get The Proper Equipment before saying anything, as evidence that he's an imposter of some sort. I would add that permanent certitude is a defect of people like my critic, not of me.

> Number 6: Carl Sandburg, "The People, Yes"
> Probably with Hughes's. I no doubt have read this poem but don't know
> it. Sandburg on this list is idiotic.

"Why is Sandburg on this list idiotic? You maintain that your kind of poetry should be equal taxonomically to any other kind of poetry, so why shouldn't Sandburg's be equal taxonomically? After all, a taxonomy makes no moral or qualitative judgments, it merely classifies according to observationally-confirmed categories. Unless, of course, this is no taxonomy after all, but rather merely a way to dress up your own opinions inappropriately in scientific clothing."

What does my aside about the presence of something by Sandburg on a list of superior poems have to do with my taxomony, Asshole? (When I've asked questions like this of my critic in the past, which I've sometimes done without calling him an asshole, he has almost always ignored them. With him, it's refute or ignore, never admit to being wrong--even if, as in this case, he no doubt read my words too quickly to avoid letting it trigger him into one of his standard but irrelevant thrusts against me (as I, too, have been guilty of).

> Number 10: Elizabeth Bishop, "In the Waiting Room"
> Another poem I've read without remembering. I can't even remember if
> she was a formalist, but think she was. (I tend not to remember
> whether modern poets are formal or freeverse.) So:
> songmode/traditional
> Number 13: Gertrude Stein, "Lifting Belly"
> probably Burstnorm/Xenolinguistic/non-representational but I can't
> remember anything of it.

"What scientist would dare to classify anything based on an admission that he or she doesn't remember the characteristics of that thing? This is just so much bullshit, Mr Grumman. Learn about and then adhere to the science you claim to be doing, or admit that you're just babbling scientisms in an effort to make your opinions seem more important than they are, or give it up."

I don't know about certified scientists, Mr. Gotcha, but I can guess about what Stein's poem is like from my familiarity with others of her works, and from the fact that I have read her poem, even though I could not pull anything about it into my writing brain while saying what I did above.

I have to admit that I'm an intellectual sadist. I can't resist drop-kicking people disagreeing moronically with me. Of course, I realize that I may be making a fool of myself. Theoretically . . . (Yeah, despite my bad cold, I continue to think I'm hitting aces all over the place of late.) And--I say this sincerely--I'd be the first to applaud if someone like Bales came up with a good zinger against me, as some have--with my acknowledgement--albeit too rarely for me to be able to remember any of the occasions.








  









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