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18 January 2005: The following is a mathemaku I sketched on my trip north in August, a week before the hurricane hit. I finally made a final draft of it at Paint Shop this morning. It was intended to be purely verbal, but then I misdrew the top of what I call the dividend shed, liked what resulted, so kept it, with "sleem" coming out of it--in color. Right now, I think the thing is brilliant, but I'll no doubt have a sounder opinion of it by the time I look at it again.



 



     

    

  















     

    

  
















     
    
  
    



  

    

      






     

    

  

    





  

    

      






     

    

  

    









  










  

    

      








     

    

  

    



 




 


  

    

      

     


     

    

  

    







 

  

    

      




     


     

    

  

    




  

    

      


 

     

    

  

    





  

    

      

        
 


     

    

  

    




  

    

      


 
 


  

     

    

  

    





  

    

      





     

    

  

    
























  

    

      









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