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14 January 2005: I posted another comment at Ron Silliman's blog about pwoermds, yesterday, a rather unruly one. I was responding to "the Prez," who had written, "One question. If the 'pwoermds' which, as mentioned, come from a combining of poem and words, how does it work successfully. For instance, these excerpts neither communicate lucid semantic meaningh, and neither do they communicate poetic intention or meaning. So how do we judge? And, most importantly, how does the creator (and I'm speaking to Huth now) judge their work?

"It's all well and good to say this is new, it's the logical progression of post-avant poetry, but what, if anything, does it want to say?"

The Prez had earlier called pwoermds boring, so I started my reply by insulting him about that. (It's all having the moon in Aries, folks--snapped at, I snap back.) I said, "Now I understand why pwoermds bore you, the Prez. But you should know that for people who can read, a single word can have 'lucid semantic meaning,' even a word like Ron's 'mmon.' That is, a misspelled word displayed as a poem (which, the Prez, is how such words communicate 'poetic intention')--displayed as, to be precise, what I'd call an 'infraverbal poem' because what counts is what's going on in it below the level of words. Ron's "mmon" seems to me easily recognized as a truncation of 'common.' It appeals strong to me, conceptually, rather than imagistically. Just why, I'm not sure, but here are a few beginnings of reasons. (These, let me say first, occur to me because I've been involved with this kind of poetry for many years, as you apparently have not, the Prez, which may be the reason you can't yet connect to it rather than an inability to read. But it may also just be due to a quirk of mind I have and you don't.)

"First off, there's the joke of the word 'common' being made uncommon through spelling. This leads to thoughts and feelings about the concept, commonness--about perhaps how something common can wear into something unique, for example. Something in it about language grabs me, too--like how superfluous 'co' is in this particular word. Also the strangeness of the extra m, which unpronounceably indicates a second syllable, a sort of mute syllable, which is a paradox since a syllable by definition is something pronounceable. 'Language is weird,' is the message this could be turned into intellectually, but you must feel this strangeness for the poem to work for you. I do, you don't--or didn't.

"I don't think anyone is saying, 'this is new, it's the logical progression of post-avant poetry.' It's now over thirty years old, and is no 'progression,' just a side-path some poets have or will find worth pursuing and some non-poets have or will find worth consideration. It means to say all the many things all poetry throughout history has."

The Prez took all this amiably. Here's his reply, in totum: "Point taken. I will try and familiarize myself more with this type of poetry.

"But somehow it strikes me as awfully elitist. I know this doesn't mean anything to those that are part of the poetics community. I also know that there is not just one community of readers. I will try to learn more about it. Thanks for your take.

"-The Prez (an old dog)"






















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