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26 December 2004: A few participants in the New-Poetry discussion group were discussing the late Jackson Mac Low's chance-generated works (mostly negatively) and one of them happened to mention some novel that used no word with an "e" in it (as a sterile exercise). I commented that I thought "the idea, first used, (to be) fascinating, and the result . . . to have been an intriguing exploration >of the language." I went on to blurt, "Of course, visual poets have more than a few times composed poems using NOTHING but e's."

"This I gotta see. You have an example?" asked Jason Huff.

I didn't. "I spoke too quickly," I admitted. "I was thinking about the e's. Karl Kempton has done artworks in which he uses e's to make a picture the way pointillists use dots to. I don't consider these works poems because they have no words. Others do consider them poems, though. But, Kempton HAS used the same technique with n's to make what I consider to be a poem--because upside-down n's come together with rightside-up n's in places to say, "nu" or "new," and "un" or "not." His piece, the title of which is "lost," is shown below, first small enough so one can see it whole, then enlarged, so one can "read" it. I discuss it in my Of Manywhere-at-Once. Other single letters can pun out meanings in single-letter poems such as "r" for "are," "m" for "am," "b" for "be" (odd how many letters can speak of being) "i" and "o" for themselves, "u" for "you" and so on.








Here's what I said about it in both Of Manywhere-at-Once and an essay of "precincts of the fourth apocalypse" that it's from that I posted as a previous entry:



A second frame from "precincts of the 5th apocalypse" called, "lost," is divided into two banded halves whose bands fail to line up--which certainly gives its protagonist a strong feel of lostness. He seems to be in a habitat which is out of synch--or senseless, wrong, alien; indeed, the figure is going exactly wrong, moving on the left in a direction exactly opposite to the flow of the environment on the right.

Actually he's going nowhere at the moment, but standing befuddledly still, looking simultaneously, mouth agape, to the right and blankly forward (such double or multiple actions cubistically possible due to the schematized abstraction of the figure). He is at a halt in a locus both up and down or west and east--schizophrenic, that is.

He is severally-tangled throughout. More interesting, he is hanging together in a kind of state of suspense appropriate for one who has lost his bearings. Kempton deftly indicates this state by building his man of five discrete pieces of lines, each of which slides into at least one other piece but not looking as though capable of holding anywhere; rather, each piece floats in place, on the verge of falling into a heap.

An even more beautifully subtle deftness of Kempton's is his choosing n's to portray his man with--that is, with the opposite letter of the u's which comprise the picture's background! That this use of two typographical characters to draw a picture happens only this one time in Kempton's "apocalypse" especially accentuates the man's "wrongness"--or his environment's.

It also gives a verbal dimension to the picture-- and, in fact, makes a visual poem of it--spelling "un," a word suggesting disintegration, a coming apart. At the same time it spells "nu," or "new," another word (in its ultimate use as a description of the never-experienced-before) for "that which is fearfully disorienting." Meanwhile, the grunted "nnnn" of the figure against the backdrop of the similarly elemental "uuuu" grunt of the environment paints other appropriate effects into the scene, these ones auditory.

"lost," incidentally, shows how the use of familiar typographical characters to dot out pictures can help a reader: it this case, it helps him pick up the change of the u's to n's more readily than he would have if the image had consisted of, say, squiggles rather than letters.







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