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15 December 2004.
Before

the number lS continues
to feel its wane
to four times more
divided by
daisy-lewd lunations
they can't
exception date
but when rain
along the be
training four
the lone expiration

Continents number
through the pass
severely under-fumed,
those of their wetter edges
they can't
invest left in the
small girl's rain
Why use blue?
Or even mushrooms
when the, or how the
jar jars

brown, the only color
with more than half-
awareness
is too many voices
to unliquify
Redistribution may
or join the avid
since
so often told of
Connecticut.


If I am not, then what am? That question, I think, sums up my whole philosophy of how words should be used (in serious discourse).






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