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23 November 2004. Back to the Poem poem I've been building. I now have a rough draft of it done: |
Poem Meets His Double Murked in his t oo offennedness, inw are only, if that, Poem lingled lamefully intrue underestness. The craternal just-audible billow of the near-sightedness of the rocCKks above him had no e ff ect on him, nor did the fiersh odors of the pre-skyed grass, weeds and flowers more than blink a mome nt or two into his nea rr owing, colorle ss ingly. Alorst something unslacked a small crease in his inwa reness. It had a howl's bulk at first but soon got close en ough for him to see it was too high-literate and constrained along its spine to be a howl or even a yaw p, frictifyingly rough-edged though it was in spots. He muttered. It was .cte ,ecnelis htiw pu thgil ot syawla gnilggurts eciov. It was he. He muttered much more angrily when he noticed the absence of genitals. |
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The first stanza is as it was yesterday, except that I added a few syllable chops (and a "CK") to it as further parodization of this kind of poem. I had great ideas for continuing it, but saw a chance for a sardonic punch line against I couldn't resist. Ergo: C*o*m*i*n*g  S*o*o*n to THIS BLOG: "Poem Analyzes His Double!" . . . I hope.
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