2 April 2004. Now I'm pumped to jump into Harbor View--but I can't allow myself to! Too much else to take care of first. Meanwhile, though, I thought of another layer I should probably have: an adult detective sequence; or maybe I could make it part of the Hardy Boys layer with patches. A layer devoted to Odysseus, probably my favorite mythic hero, is another possibility. I've already done a four-frame sequence on him. I plan, by the way, to re-use earlier poems of mine, which might include this one--or have I already said that?

Another thought of mine from this morning is to run a single sentence from page one to the last page, or two or more such sentences, each one--perhaps--a different color, and possibly rising or dropping, even into and through some other such sentence. A poem just using such sentences would probably be worth giving a trial run to. . . .

Here's my image from yesterday again, reworked. I decided it needed some open areas in it. I have yesterday's above it to make a comparison easy. I continue not to value these things very much but really get involved with them--enjoyably.