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9 March 2004. Another "final version" of a mathemaku a previous version of which was posted here 11 February. I've sluggished down from where I was yesterday, so can't say I'm delerious about this one--or, anymore, yesterday's. At the time I was looking over the mathemaku-in-progress I'd been posting, and saw a way to make this one work (I thought) within seconds of re-examining it, I thought I'd come up with a (nother) masterpiece. I still think I improved it. All I did was replace the dividend with the remainder. This happens a lot with me--for some reason I get words or images that work well together, but need time to figure out where most effectively to place them. The old draft of my poem, and the new, follow:








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