From Ancient Asgard he comes, The Prince of that Realm, an immortal warrior whose heritage is tied both to the realm eternal as well as Earth itself ! He stands for honor and is a divine force for good in the eternal struggle . His Strength of arm is second to none and it swings the mystic hammer Mjolnir for all that is just and right ! He is The Mighty THOR, God of Thunder ! And all the forces of the storm are his to command!

Thor #504

"Here there be Demons!"

By Ralph L. Angelo Jr







Splash page: ( A mass of reptilian bodies cover the figure on the street amid the wreckage of the surrounding buildings. It's night A muscular arm is reaching out of the mass of pounding creatures. It's Thor)

Narrator: Quick recap dept. See that arm there, yes, that one right there. That's the star of this book, The Mighty Thor. Last ish he came back from a year extended stay in an alternate reality to a Homecoming party by Lord Odin. Later that night Amora the enchantress decided to pay the Thunder god a visit in his little used palace when she attacked him and changed her shape to reveal her true form. After a brief battle Thor defeated the creature only to be attacked by the rest of her "family". That brings us up to now.

Page 2 (the reptilians cover Thor, but suddenly there is a rumbling, almost a roar that slowly builds in volume)

Reptilian voices: Die thunderer ! Hisssssss, your death will be the final spike in cursed Assssssssgardsssss tomb!!!! Hhiiiiisss!!

Thor: GET.THEE..BACK!!!!!!!!! BA-DA_BOOOOMMM!!!!!!!

(With a mighty heave of legendary proportions Thor hurls the Lizard like beings as if they were paper in a hurricane)

Thor: "Monsters ! What hath thou done with my fellow Asgardians !! Where is my father where is ODIN !!"

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Thor: "Now beasts Feel the wrath of the son of Odin!!"

(Thor begins to whirl Mjolnir around his head , creating a massive wind storm that scatters the lizards)

Thor: "Thou hath sown the wind monsters, now feel the FURY of its MASTER !!!"

WHRAKKOOOOMMMM!!!

(Suddenly through the whirling storm a figure can be seen struggling toward Thor. It is the massive figure of Odin)

Odin: "Stand thee down my son, it is thy sire Odin !"

Thor: "Father? Is it truly you? I am partially blinded by these beasts father, my vision has not returned in full as yet."

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(Odin strides purposefully towards Thor as Thor begins to weaken the winds)

Odin: "Of course it is I my son, verily, who else BUT Odin could approach thee through thy righteous fury?"

Thor: "Father , my heart doth sing to hear thy voice. What hath transpired here?"

(Odin gets closer)

Odin: " Why my son these beings are known as "the old ones" They are the true gods all others are mere shades of."

Thor :"What father? What sayest thou?"

(Thor still stands, rubbing his eyes, obviously still not seeing well at all)

Odin:" I said trusting fool, that YOU are the impostor here and I am the true god !"

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(Suddenly "Odin" raises his arm and blasts Thor point blank, blowing him through another home on the ancient cobblestone street. Thor slumps to the ground , unconscious.)

Odin: "Pompous godling, (As he speaks, his form shimmers, and begins to change) even at full strength you would've had no chance against SSSothgarn, Lord of the Old Ones. !!"

(He is now fully transformed into the largest of the Lizards, with an eight foot tail and corded muscles like cables beneath reptilian scales)

SSSothgarn: "Bring him to his former home, the castle of Asgard. Let him be a guesssst there, one lassssst time. Hahahahahahahahahahaha!"

(Several of the reptilians grab Thors unconscious form and carry him away as SSSothgarn continues laughing.)

Page 6: Thor hangs, unconscious from a dungeon wall . Large chains bind his wrists and ankles, as does a massive collar around his neck. He wears nothing save the shorts he had on while sleeping

SSSothgarn: "Awaken godling, it is time for your education."

Sssothgarn throws a bucket of water in Thors' face

Thor: "What? Where Am I? "

Thors vision begins to clear as he sees the creature before him clearly for the first time.

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Thor: " Demon !! I'll tear out thy venomous heart! Where are my people? "

Sssothgarn: " You are in no position to isssssssue threats Assssssgardian. I am Sssothgarn, leader of the old ones. This (He waves his arm around himself) Was all ours at one time, a millennia before you were born. I was prayed to for centuries before you or your father existed."

Thor: "I have heard no tell of thee monster, thou art spewing lies between thy venomous teeth."

Sssothgarn:" Perhaps I am godling, perhaps not. As I was saying , my followers were there sacrificing humans to me in an age undreamed of.Ancient Stygia was MYcusp of power. My people roamed the streets, using our shape shifting abilities to blend in as the lowly Chameleon does by changing his colors."

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Sssothgarn: "From before Atlantis sank we were there. My followers prayed to my divine self as well as my fellow gods of the Scale ,we prospered. Humans became slaves and the land was ours. Then came other gods, these Gods empowered humans in massive numbers to resist us as they themselves did battle us on the Godly plains. At this time Odin was born and a mighty warrior he became. The final battle for this land took place between myself and he. We battled for days unending, the heavens rocked with our power. On Earth the oceans drank Atlantis and Lemuria disappeared soon after. Our battle was a thing unheard of before this time. Gods warring upon each other to decide the fate of a world !!! Oh the glory of it all!!!"

Thor : "As glorious as you recall it Sssothgarn, obviously thou hadst lost."

Sssothgarn spins, obviously enraged , his massive tail sweeping the air with a fury that literally hums.

Sssothgarn: "Do not tempt my fury puny one, you are in no way able to defend yourself from my wrath"

He smashes Thor with his tail. Obviously Thor is angered and begins to pull at his chains

Page 9: Sssothgarn:"Those chains are mystic in nature boy, you cannot break them !! Such is my power!!"

Thor: "Mayhap monsterbut none may say me NAY!!" BRA-KOOOMMMMM!!!

With a massive burst of strength Thor pulls the chains from the wall, pulling half the wall down on top of Sssothgarn.

Thor: " Aye beast, the chains were unbreakable but not the wall they were attached to !"

Suddenly the rubble moves and the massive Lizard god shrugs the debris away and stands tall, his full height of 8' apparant, as is the 8' tail behind him

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Sssothgarn: "Very well pup, if battle you would want, then so be it after what you did to my daughter, then this is perhaps the way it shopuld be !!"

Sssothgarn flings himself at Thor, who is rocked backwards by the monsters might



Thor:" Well struck beast, now tis MY turn"

Thor fires off a massive right , that sends the Demon thing pwards, crashing through the ceiling above, and several stories up as well

Thor: "So the demon in my bed chambers was thy daughter eh? Now tis time thou felt what she did!"

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Leaping up throught the shattered floors Thor catches a blast of energy from the beast square in the chest and is hurled out the side of the palace royal itself.

Sssothgarn : "I see you are going to be difficult welp, but you WILL bow before4 my might. "

Thor: "The son of Odin bows to noone, save the All father himself !!"

Thor reaches out his hand to the sky and closes his eyes concetrating, on a nearby street several of the lizardbeings struggle to pry Mjolnir from the ground

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As if on its own Mjolnir suddenly flies away, around corners of the Mystic realm it flies and into Thors own waiting hand

(All of the above was in a birds eye view as it were, concluding as it lands in Thors hand)

Thor : "Now monster , I will ask again, WHERE ARE MY PEOPLE ?"

Sssothgarn: "Fool, your people were gone for a year, your own father did this, scattering them to protect them from Ragnarok. After a long absence they returned."

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Sssothgarn: "And I was waiting. I and my fellow old ones watched as Odin battled the egyptian godling Set, finally Odin and your people prevailed and when they did, I struck! I knew weakened as Odin was from his ordeal he would not be able to protect himself and your fellow Asgardians from my wrath. I sent him where he had sent me and mine centuries before, to a nameless Limbo that has been our prison! Now it is theirs. It took me and my fellows countless centuries to free ourselves, that is your brethrens fate now !!"

Thors face is shocked But with a roar he attacks again, hurling Mighty Mjolnir at his adversary

Thor: "For Odin, for Asgard !! "

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Mjolnir strikes Sssothgarn full in the face, snapping him backwards and away, as it returns to the thunder gods hand he begins to whirl it on his right hand side.

Thor : " We do battle in earnest now demon and as such I will be garbed for the role."

Thor pulls from the swirling vortex a leathern sack, inside it is one of his most prized posessions.

With a roar of air Thor flies skyward, allighting to a parapet of castle Asgard, there he dons his warriors armor* his belt of strength and his mighty gauntlets of power.

(*Last seen being worn by Thunderstrike , in an issue of that late, lamented book. Poor Eric, we knew him well.---Reminicsin Ralph)

Looking down upon the crowd of lizard gods below, he roars

Thor: " Now beasts, feel the fury of the one TRUE god amongst ye!"

And with a leap Thor is off the roof and flying towards his enemies

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Interlude one

A man enters an empty building on Manhattans upper west side. He is shrouded in mystery, his face unseen. Behind him is a woman talking constantly

Woman: "As you can see sir, the whole building is vacant, just as you said you were looking for. It's an open ,empty building, 10 stories tall and---."

With a wave of his hand the man silences her, he looks upwards

Man: "Yes, I'll take it. Send the papers to my office immediately. I want to move in tomorrow."

Woman "Tomorrow sir? That is quite unorthodox an almost impossible I---"

He spins quickly looking at her, no Glaring at her





Man: "Nothing is impossible, do it, I will cover all costs, whatever they may be."

End interlude one

Interlude two

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In the mountains of Norway , one of those very Mountains explodes outward with a blast of incredible power. Suddenly and so quickly as to almost be invisible, a crimson cloaked figure hurtles away into the mid-day sky, sun glinting off a shined war helm



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Thor flies down from on high, plowing through the Lizard gods like a scythe through wheat. the landing he raises Mjolnir high and brings it down with all his legendary might!! BADABADAKOOOOOOMMM!

The Lizard gods are thrown about from the resultant seismic shockwave.



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Thor spins Mjolnir over in his hand, facing the handle end down then solidly smacks the handle twice against the ground , creating an instant Monsoon, the likes of which has never been seen before!!



Thor: "I will Raze Asgard Entire Afore I allow the likes of thee to occupy it foul creatures."

Sssothgarn: " I will KILL you Thunder god !!! Never before, not even in battle against your father have I faced such a tenacious foe! you've more then earned my enmity !!"

Sssothgarn advances on Thor and throws both his hands forward, expelling huge blasts of mystic energy!

Thor graasps Mjolnir with both hands and counters with all his power at his command !! Bakooooomm!!

the resultant explosion throws both opponents backwards and away.



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Thor is the first to regain his footing

Thor: "My fury is boundless now demon thou and thy ilk will leave whence thou came, back to thy venemous void!"

Thor begins to spin Mjolnir overhead, faster then the mortal eye can follow, a massive twister ensues, easily a mile across overhead. the Lizard men try to run but Lightening from the storm strike them down in their tracks,

Nameless Lizard god : "Sssothgarn, save us, this Assssgardian isss a demon from the pitsss !! We cannot fight him, he overwhelmsss usss!!"

SSSothgarn: "Cowardly curr, you do no justice to our race, face your doom like a GOD.!!!"

SSSothgarn picks up the terrified Lizard god and hurls him at Thor, who smacks him away and intop the twister.

Thor : " NOw I will use your own long affinity with that other dimension to return thee to thy once and future home monsters."



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Thor: ( I will use Mjolnirs ability to open other dimensions by getting the very nature of that foul place from the bodies of these beasts, using there own aura to find the foul dimension itself! But if I can contact Odin himself....)

"Father !! Hear thy sons call!! help me to save thee and all of the nine worlds!! Guide my hand father!! "

Sssothgarn: "Whelp!! No one can hear you , or save your brethren, but I will not go back without your death! "

Sssothgarn throws himself at Thor from behind, tackling him Thor hurls

Sssothgarn away, leaping to his feet, he flies through the air and into Ssothgarn,

toppling another castle wall, all the while the Cyclone spins mightily overhead.

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Thor: "Foul creature, I expected no better from you, your cowardly attack is l.ike all snakes in the grass."

All of the other Lizard gods are now sucked in to the cyclone, lightening is blanketing the ground as the storm is furiously destroying everything in its path. Sensing the truth, that he has finally lost SSsothgarn begins to run.

Thor: "You 'll not escape my wrath demon, back to the hell you so deserve i send thee!!"

Sssothgarn: "YOU are the demon Asssgardian, I will not go back, I would rather die before that !!"

Sssothgarn runs towards the rainbow bridge, with Thor in hot pursuit, he turns and fires multiple mystic blasts at Thor. Thor fights his way through them, closing quickly as the deluge continues. Lightening strikes SSSothgarn repeatedly, but he will not fall, instead he redoubles hi attack on Thor.

Thor: "Thy battle is over monster, join thy like in the prison Odin hath created for thee."

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Sssothgarn: "Never thunderer, do you hear? NEVER NEVER !!!!!"

Sssothgarn hurls himself one last time at Thor and the two lock in a death grip, hands on each others throats, faces inches away from each others!! Then Sssothgarn spits into thors face, only this time Thor is ready! He drops his head down, catching the venom on his helmet, it bounces back into SSothgarns own face, causing him immense pain.

Thor: "Never think a true warrior falls for the same ruse twice Lizard !!"

Sssothgarn: "AAAaarrrrrggghhh my eyes !! My eyes !!"

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Sssothgarn punches his way past Thor and runs screaming and blind, right off the rainbow bridge

Sssothgarn: "Aaaarrrggghhhhh, aahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!"

Thor: " No you fool !! He's forever lost now atween the dimensional void that exists twixt Asgard and midgard.



Thor turns and walks back into the realm as a voice calls from behind

Voice: "Fear not for thy enemy Thunder god !! In the end he received his just reward!'



Thor spins, and through the storm he sees shadowy figures approach, many of them !! Tapping Mjolnir on the ground thrice more he ends the mighty storm and suddenly there stand in all their majestic glory , The Lost Gods of asgard !!!

Thor:" Father!! My fellow Asgardians !! you all have returned!"



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Odin: "Aye my son but only through your power !!Well done my son, well done indeed !!"



Thor: "You saw my father?"

Odin: " Aye my son as did we all, from the moment thou hath returned to Asgard to this we saw all that hath transpired. Only thy unwavering loyalty and might hath saved us all as well as Midgod itself.!"

Suddenly Thors eyes seem to roll up as his legs give out beneath him.

Sif: "Thor!"

She runs towards his collapsing form as the Enchantress likewise albeit slower,takes the same steps towards his slumped form.

Volsatagg: "I will carry him myself to the Leeches* upon my own mighty shoulders!!"



* Doctor



Odin: "No Brave Volstagg, none will carry Thor save his own sire this day."

Odin kneels and lifts the unconscious Thor



Page 25 Full page spread of Odin carrying Thor with all the Asgardians behind them.



Odin : "Let all who can hear my word proclaim his Glory !! Thor, Asgards mightiest son hath saved God and man alike this day from a foe most heinious! Honor him as never before! So say we all, for Thor, For Asgard !!



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