Caption: The She-Hulk meets Powdered Toast Man!
She-Hulk: Geez, even in fan fiction I can’t get a decent villain.

(Page 1, panel 1. A supermarket. We see the She-Hulk with a cart in front of her, which has some food items and such in it.)

Cap (N1): A nice, quiet day, so far.
Cap (N2): Then again, it would be a really boring fan fiction if things remained quiet.
Cap (N3): Wouldn’t it?

(Panel 2. She-Hulk is seen putting something into her cart.)

Cap (S1): Grocery time again.
Cap (S2): You’d think I’d have someone buy groceries for me.
Cap (S3): That’s not my style.
Cap (S4): And I’m alone again.
Cap (S5): Almost.

(Panel 3. Pull back to see about 5-6 horny teenage males in various styles of dress following She-Hulk around and drooling.)

Cap (S1): The thing about my fan club is,
Cap (S2): I want to punch their lights out.

(Panel 4. She-Hulk grimaces.)

Cap (S): These guys should really get a life.

(Page 2, panel 1. Go outside to see Dr. Dough-naught with his latest creation, a robot named Bulge. It is about 7 feet tall, strong, and very sturdy looking.)

Dough-naught: Ha! Ha! Ha! I, Doctor Dough-naught am about to unveil my latest creation to make breakfast the sugar-coated, cholesterol laden meal it was designed to be... meet my new robot, Bulge!

(Panel 2. Dough-naught sends Bulge into the supermarket.)

Dough-naught: Go forth, my robot, and destroy the breakfast aisle! And be sure to get the Powdered Toast Section!! Ha! Ha! Ha!

(Panel 3. Back inside, the She-Hulk confronts the teens following her.)

She-Hulk: Don’t you have anything better to do?
Teen1: Dude, she like talked to us!
Teen2: Totally excellent, dude!

(Panel 4. She-Hulk grimaces.)

She-Hulk: Shouldn’t you be in school now?
Teen1: Dude... she talked to us again!!

(Page 3, panel 1. She goes into the breakfast aisle, and the teens follow her. There is a stockman putting cans of Powdered Toast on the shelf.)

She-Hulk: I’m only going to say this once... get away from me.
Teen 1: Dude, like, we should talk back to her.
Teen 2: No way! I’m talking back to her!

(Panel 2. The Stockman approaches She-Hulk.)

Stockman: Good afternoon, Ms. She-Hulk. Problems?
She-Hulk: These guys have the intelligence of a slab of beef. They won’t stop following me no matter what I do.

(Panel 3. The stockman smiles.)

Stockman: (1) Let me handle this.
Stockman: (2) Yo dudes, what’s hanging?
Teen 1: He dude, we’re just like scoping out this bodacious babe here.

(Panel 4. They continue to talk.)

Stockman: But dude, shouldn’t you like be doing the school thing?
Teen 1: Dude, that scene is like so totally bogus.

(Page 4, panel 1. They continue to talk some more.)

Stockman: Well, like this babe is like the superheroine type, and like if she find out you’re not in school, she’s like gonna drag you back there, dudes.
Teens: Bogus.

(Panel 2. The teens go off.)

She-Hulk: Thank you.
Stockman: No prob, she-babe - er, I mean, it was my pleasure, Ms. She-Hulk.

(Panel 3. She-Hulk takes a can of powdered toast.)

She-Hulk: Call me Ms. Walters. And thanks for the powdered toast.

(Panel 4. She turns to leave.)

Stockman: I’m going to tell my grandkids about this, someday...

(Page 5, panel 1. Suddenly Bulge breaks through the shelving.)

Bulge: Bulge break breakfast!!
She-Hulk: Oh, not again...

(Panel 2. Enter Dr. Dough-naught.)

Dough-naught: Forward, my bulge!! Destroy breakfast!! Destroy powdered toast!
She-Hulk: Once, just once I’d like to go somewhere and not have some lame-o attack.

(Panel 3. Dough-naught faces the She-Hulk.)

Dough-naught: The She-Hulk! Curses! She could ruin everything!

(Panel 4. Bulge attacks the She-Hulk, striking her from behind, sending her into the Powdered Toast display.)

Dough-naught: Bulge, get her!!
Bulge: Bulge break babe!
SFX: POW!!!

(Page 6, panel 1. She-Hulk is seen lying in a pool of powdered toast.)

She-Hulk: You know, if coming out of the closet of characters without a series means getting a bunch of lumps from some lame villain, I think I’d rather go back there.

(Panel 2. Lunging forward, The She-Hulk strikes Bulge, knocking him into the shelves.)

She-Hulk: Now it’s time for me to show you my moves!
SFX: WHAM!!

(Panel 3. Dough-naught is distressed as the She-Hulk knocks off Bulge’s head with her fist.)

She-Hulk: At least you could have built him better.
SFX: SPA-KOW!!
Dough-naught: No! My beautiful robot!!

(Panel 4. She-Hulk puts her fist through Bulge.)

SFX: POOM!!!
She-Hulk: Your robot’s toast!
Dough-Naught: Curses! Foiled by the She-Hulk!

(Page 7, panel 1. She-Hulk picks up Dr. Dough-naught.)

She-Hulk: You’re going to jail, mister!
Dough-naught: Never!!

(Panel 2. Suddenly Powdered Toast Man enters, knocking down the She-Hulk, who drops Dr. Dough-naught.)

Powdered Toastman: Leave everything to - OOF!
SFX: CRASH!!

(Panel 3. We see Powdered Toastman lying on top of the She-Hulk, who is on top of Dr. Dough-naught.)

Powdered Toastman: Uhn... got to get the brakes fixed.
She-Hulk: Powdered Toastman?
Dough-naught: Get off me!! You two aren’t exactly featherweights, you know.

(Panel 4. The three of them stand, as She-Hulk holds down Dr. Dough-naught.)

She-Hulk: Way to go, Toastie. I’ve already subdued Dr. Dough-naught. You missed out on everything!
Powdered Toastman: I’m sorry, She-Hulk, but little Jeffrey ran out of Powdered Toast. I couldn’t back down on a loyal fan!

(Page 8, panel 1. Powdered Toastman get a call on his elast-shorts.)

SFX: Poomph!
Powdered Toastman: Sorry, but duty calls!

(Panel 2. Powdered Toastman flies off.)

Powdered Toastman: Powdered Toastman!!
She-Hulk: Give me a break.

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